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  1. Posted: January 30, 2018In: Public

    Question for the admins… After a log has an initial thread, and later down the line additional changes are made, can you consider a way to post updates to the older thread while being able to bump it back to the top so that people will not miss things?

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on January 30, 2018 at 3:24 am

    How about using the 'Contact' listing at the top right hand corner of the home page to raise the issue directly with the Admins?

    How about using the ‘Contact’ listing at the top right hand corner of the home page to raise the issue directly with the Admins?

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  2. Posted: March 5, 2016In: Horror

    When a cynical surgeon renounces his ancestral ties with a cabalistic tradition, he becomes the target of a dark force and must battle a phantasmagorical creature unleashed by the dark force to destroy him and everything he holds dear.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on March 6, 2016 at 2:50 am

    Hi there Chidi,It's also the function of a logline to give an idea of how the story unfolds - in terms of the main action.So, what is your hero's main action? Is it 'breaking and entry' or does he do battle with the creature in order to save his family?It's for this reason that the first part of theRead more

    Hi there Chidi,

    It’s also the function of a logline to give an idea of how the story unfolds – in terms of the main action.

    So, what is your hero’s main action? Is it ‘breaking and entry’ or does he do battle with the creature in order to save his family?

    It’s for this reason that the first part of the original? logline – “after he renounces ties with his cabbalistic… ” – is essential to the logline.

    But you need to go beyond this statement and give the actual reason why he renounces his ties and that reason needs to be something intriguing that relates to his family or a member of the family.

    As of now, the agoraphobia is a side issue in regard to the logline.

    Hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: November 26, 2015In: Action

    A young martial artist must find his uncle and request his help in fighting his father, a martial arts master who is determined to kill him.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on November 27, 2015 at 8:14 am

    Thanks, dpg. I like it. The father is the punchline. And yes, the training sequence is paramount in this movie genre. Personally, I'm referencing ' The 36th Chamber of Shaolin' - the ultimate martial arts training movie.

    Thanks, dpg. I like it. The father is the punchline. And yes, the training sequence is paramount in this movie genre. Personally, I’m referencing ‘ The 36th Chamber of Shaolin’ – the ultimate martial arts training movie.

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