1. Posted: July 17, 2017In:

    When her reclusive father dies without a will, his washed-up rodeo queen daughter must gather her estranged siblings in order to settle his estate.

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    Maybe this one drills down a bit more: When a former rodeo queen and her ex-con?brother inherit their father?s struggling farm,?they have one shot of avoiding foreclosure, and changing their dubious reputations for the better.

    Maybe this one drills down a bit more:

    When a former rodeo queen and her ex-con?brother inherit their father?s struggling farm,?they have one shot of avoiding foreclosure, and changing their dubious reputations for the better.


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  2. Posted: July 17, 2017In:

    When her reclusive father dies without a will, his washed-up rodeo queen daughter must gather her estranged siblings in order to settle his estate.

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    I like it. What about this: When a former rodeo queen and her ex-con?brother inherit their father's struggling farm, they have one?chance to make it a success, ?and one to?turn around their failed lives.

    I like it. What about this:

    When a former rodeo queen and her ex-con?brother inherit their father’s struggling farm, they have one?chance to make it a success, ?and one to?turn around their failed lives.

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  3. Posted: July 17, 2017In:

    When her reclusive father dies without a will, his washed-up rodeo queen daughter must gather her estranged siblings in order to settle his estate.

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    ...and he is the antagonist. There's not a puddle he can't step in, he can't live life straight. He wants to belong but he's just not wired that way.

    …and he is the antagonist. There’s not a puddle he can’t step in, he can’t live life straight. He wants to belong but he’s just not wired that way.

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