"When?an experiment turns a clumsy scientist and his sexy?assistant?into?highly intelligent zombies,?they must find a cure for their uncontrollable hunger before turning on each other." Hopefully, this doesn't change your idea too much, you just seemed to have some trouble putting it into a reasonabRead more
“When?an experiment turns a clumsy scientist and his sexy?assistant?into?highly intelligent zombies,?they must find a cure for their uncontrollable hunger before turning on each other.”
Hopefully, this doesn’t change your idea too much, you just seemed to have some trouble putting it into a reasonable number of words.
I don’t know if the ambiguity of “turning on” was intentional wordplay or not, but I went with it.
I also changed the two assistants to one, since you already have an antagonist – the zombie virus – and love triangles are stupid.
Sorry, it just occurred to me that I’ve turned your horror idea into “sexy comedy”.
In a world where the police can get a warrant to search your memories, a former cop is implanted with murderous false memories and must find a way to have them removed before he’s caught and his mind read.
Lucius Paisley
http://memory-alpha.wikia.com/wiki/Extreme_Measures_(episode)
http://memory-alpha.wikia.com/wiki/Extreme_Measures_(episode)
See lessWhen a lab experiment goes horribly wrong, a clumsy scientist and his two pretty female assistants become the first highly intelligent zombies. Not willing to share their newly found powers with the knowledge hungry human elite that forcefully tries to get bitten, they barricade themselves in their research facility trying to find a cure for their own uncontrollable hunger and bad looks, before turning on themselves. But cure or no cure ? they still have to find a way out!
Lucius Paisley
The thing is none of that is really important to a logline - you just need a hero, an incident and a goal, everything else goes into the story.
The thing is none of that is really important to a logline – you just need a hero, an incident and a goal, everything else goes into the story.
See lessWhen a lab experiment goes horribly wrong, a clumsy scientist and his two pretty female assistants become the first highly intelligent zombies. Not willing to share their newly found powers with the knowledge hungry human elite that forcefully tries to get bitten, they barricade themselves in their research facility trying to find a cure for their own uncontrollable hunger and bad looks, before turning on themselves. But cure or no cure ? they still have to find a way out!
Lucius Paisley
"When?an experiment turns a clumsy scientist and his sexy?assistant?into?highly intelligent zombies,?they must find a cure for their uncontrollable hunger before turning on each other." Hopefully, this doesn't change your idea too much, you just seemed to have some trouble putting it into a reasonabRead more
“When?an experiment turns a clumsy scientist and his sexy?assistant?into?highly intelligent zombies,?they must find a cure for their uncontrollable hunger before turning on each other.”
Hopefully, this doesn’t change your idea too much, you just seemed to have some trouble putting it into a reasonable number of words.
I don’t know if the ambiguity of “turning on” was intentional wordplay or not, but I went with it.
I also changed the two assistants to one, since you already have an antagonist – the zombie virus – and love triangles are stupid.
Sorry, it just occurred to me that I’ve turned your horror idea into “sexy comedy”.
Just an idea. Do what you want with it…
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