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  1. Posted: June 21, 2017In: Drama

    Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

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    Added an answer on June 22, 2017 at 11:10 pm

    The issue is that I don't want the audience to know that the dancer is Karl until later on in the season (approximately episode 3 or 4) but there will be clues (his cell phone cover matches the cell phone cover of the man who was performing oral sex, he will mention something about how he only madeRead more

    The issue is that I don’t want the audience to know that the dancer is Karl until later on in the season (approximately episode 3 or 4) but there will be clues (his cell phone cover matches the cell phone cover of the man who was performing oral sex, he will mention something about how he only made 300 bucks in “tips” but we will see the character getting 300 dollars in payout from the club, etc)

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  2. Posted: June 21, 2017In: Drama

    Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

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    Added an answer on June 22, 2017 at 11:07 pm

    Have any of you seen the show mixology(Netflix)? I love the way the storylines flow (as elementary as the show is) A more mature example would be that of the movie Crash. Both of these are shot in chron order in a shorter period of time... Karl is an exotic dancer but he tells everyone, including hiRead more

    Have any of you seen the show mixology(Netflix)? I love the way the storylines flow (as elementary as the show is)

    A more mature example would be that of the movie Crash.

    Both of these are shot in chron order in a shorter period of time…

    Karl is an exotic dancer but he tells everyone, including his Indonesian cousin, that he is a bartender. Every other episode consists of Karl almost being caught or having to cover his tracks- needing a name of this fake catering company he works for, having to explain the fact that he can’t answer his phone for long hours, how he has so much money, etc.

    I watched the video (thank you SO much for that) and I believe that the show should be based around the Indonesian character or Karl. Indonesia because there is the person (technically persons) of her past that is trying to enter her life present day and Karl because of all the lies he has to tell everyone.

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  3. Posted: June 21, 2017In: Drama

    Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

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    Added an answer on June 21, 2017 at 10:06 pm

    I know we've been going back and forth a bit but I'd really like to start this off by thanking all of you for your help (and also not making me feel like an absolute idiot). So thanks everyone :) Sofie just wants fame, any way she can get it- she's more supporting so I guess I'll kick her out. GrahaRead more

    I know we’ve been going back and forth a bit but I’d really like to start this off by thanking all of you for your help (and also not making me feel like an absolute idiot).
    So thanks everyone 🙂

    Sofie just wants fame, any way she can get it- she’s more supporting so I guess I’ll kick her out.

    Graham doesn’t know what he wants really, with anything- from his random day jobs to relationships, unfortunately, there is quite the backstory for his character that is only really revealed through interactions and flashbacks so with that. I’m guessing he’s out too?

    Which leaves my Indonesian victim of sexual abuse who moved to the city in pursuit of her dreams only to realize that she’s only running from her past.

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