I can only assume that she MUST obtain evidence now that he killed someone close to her... This is your inciting event, and it needs to be front and center in the logline - start with that. Secondly, what's the purpose of evidence if not to use in the court of law? Her goal shouldn't be evidence butRead more
Arguably, so are all the other survivors. What is it specifically about this dude that makes his struggle against the regime interesting, or rather more interesting than anyone else's?
This sounds like an interesting film - I will try to find it. Thanks! About the logline I would change it so: After air currents crash a wealthy South Korean paraglider in North Korea,? she must collaborate with an army officer to avoid getting arrested and cross the border back home. Unfortunately,Read more
A righteous but gullible whistle-blower must obtain evidence her intimidating boss is a murderous monster before he catches on and takes sadistic steps to silence her for good.
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I can only assume that she MUST obtain evidence now that he killed someone close to her... This is your inciting event, and it needs to be front and center in the logline - start with that. Secondly, what's the purpose of evidence if not to use in the court of law? Her goal shouldn't be evidence butRead more
On a post-apocalyptic Earth with one side continually facing the sun, a gritty outsider and the metaphysical representation of his soul are forced into facing a new tyrannical regime that threatens the last remains of humanity.
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Arguably, so are all the other survivors. What is it specifically about this dude that makes his struggle against the regime interesting, or rather more interesting than anyone else's?
After accidentally landing in North Korea with a paraglider, a rich South Korean heiress with the help of a North Korean military officer has to find a way out of the country without getting arrested and killed.-Crash landing on you (2019)-37 words
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This sounds like an interesting film - I will try to find it. Thanks! About the logline I would change it so: After air currents crash a wealthy South Korean paraglider in North Korea,? she must collaborate with an army officer to avoid getting arrested and cross the border back home. Unfortunately,Read more