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A failed private investigator becomes entangled in the disappearance of a 17-year-old girl to clear a large gambling debt.
I like the story when I read your synopsis, but your logline needs polish. How about: When a failed investigator can't pay back his gambling debt he gets 1 week to find the missing daughter of a murderous creditor. It's not there yet, but raise the stakes. Have fun, Nis from Denmark
I like the story when I read your synopsis, but your logline needs polish. How about:
When a failed investigator can’t pay back his gambling debt he gets 1 week to find the missing daughter of a murderous creditor.
It’s not there yet, but raise the stakes.
Have fun,
See lessNis from Denmark
With no justice for the recent death of a gay dancer, a frustrated editor feels compelled to give his death meaning, while searching for his own.
I agree w Philippe. Also, why is it important to the editor? Frustration? You need something stronger. What if they were secretly engaged. Editor gay but hiding because he is ashamed of people’s judgments. Dancer is the opposite. But when he dies the editor realizes he can no longer hide. He must fiRead more
I agree w Philippe. Also, why is it important to the editor? Frustration? You need something stronger.
See lessWhat if they were secretly engaged. Editor gay but hiding because he is ashamed of people’s judgments. Dancer is the opposite. But when he dies the editor realizes he can no longer hide. He must fight the injustice and revenge the death of
The dancer.
There must be something in their relationship so strong it’s worth dying for.
I think the stronger the relationship is, the more exciting the story will be. He fights the injustice – and finds himself in the journey.
And, who is the opponents? The closer the better. Maybe it is his own family?