1. Posted: April 15, 2023In:

    A talented and ambitious student decides to engage in a pro-democracy movement in her oppressive authoritarian state, all while she tries to get out of the country and into the foreign university to pursue her life’s dream.

    pinang Penpusher

    By main event, you mean inciting incident? It would be her participating in anti government demonstration and being arrested. Stake is to either be able to go away and study or to stay and be imprisoned. Problem is I have a limit of 35 words which is already exceeded so I cannot just cram all the inRead more

    By main event, you mean inciting incident? It would be her participating in anti government demonstration and being arrested. Stake is to either be able to go away and study or to stay and be imprisoned.
    Problem is I have a limit of 35 words which is already exceeded so I cannot just cram all the information in there…

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  2. Posted: October 5, 2022In:

    Young siblings have to use their very particular set of skills to counter bullying and alienation they’re experiencing after moving to a new country.

    pinang Penpusher

    I might possibly add 'Two' young siblings and new school instead of country. More I think of it the more variations come to mind haha

    I might possibly add ‘Two’ young siblings and new school instead of country. More I think of it the more variations come to mind haha

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  3. Posted: October 5, 2022In:

    Young siblings have to use their very particular set of skills to counter bullying and alienation they’re experiencing after moving to a new country.

    pinang Penpusher

    oh wow, that might be even better. I'll have a think about it! thanks a lot! Would you say "particular" is better than 'unique'?

    oh wow, that might be even better. I’ll have a think about it! thanks a lot! Would you say “particular” is better than ‘unique’?

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