Haha. Thanks DPG :) "Hey guys I've got a great idea for a story... ready... it's about this guy... and each night... he sleeps." Kind of needs some work I agree :)
Haha. Thanks DPG 🙂
“Hey guys I’ve got a great idea for a story… ready… it’s about this guy… and each night… he sleeps.”
Hey Tony, you're still trying to put to much in... just my opinion. Remember what a logline is for... it needs to go smack-wow and then end, making the "reader" want more - your script! What's the story about? Is it JUST the robbery... from start to end? Or does he get the map and continue on the joRead more
Hey Tony, you’re still trying to put to much in… just my opinion.
Remember what a logline is for… it needs to go smack-wow and then end, making the “reader” want more – your script!
What’s the story about? Is it JUST the robbery… from start to end? Or does he get the map and continue on the journey?
When a well-planned bank heist goes south, the fate of a hidden map to a lost gold mine rests with a do-gooder insurance salesman.
A man who blacks out for seven hours each night has feared the day when his two lives collide, and when they do, the lives of millions hang in the balance.
Jeremy Gordon
Haha. Thanks DPG :) "Hey guys I've got a great idea for a story... ready... it's about this guy... and each night... he sleeps." Kind of needs some work I agree :)
Haha. Thanks DPG 🙂
“Hey guys I’ve got a great idea for a story… ready… it’s about this guy… and each night… he sleeps.”
Kind of needs some work I agree 🙂
See lessThe Greek gods and goddesses from myth are very much real, callous, and they are all coming for an unsuspecting 16-year-old Alexandra Adler, whether she likes it or not.
Jeremy Gordon
Yes yes, i like: send me the script ;)
Yes yes, i like: send me the script 😉
See lessAfter convincing his reformed felon brother to hold up the bank where the map to a lost goldmine is stored, a disenchanted insurance salesman must finish the job himself when his brother is shot dead by the obstinate bank manager during the heist
Jeremy Gordon
Hey Tony, you're still trying to put to much in... just my opinion. Remember what a logline is for... it needs to go smack-wow and then end, making the "reader" want more - your script! What's the story about? Is it JUST the robbery... from start to end? Or does he get the map and continue on the joRead more
Hey Tony, you’re still trying to put to much in… just my opinion.
Remember what a logline is for… it needs to go smack-wow and then end, making the “reader” want more – your script!
What’s the story about? Is it JUST the robbery… from start to end? Or does he get the map and continue on the journey?
When a well-planned bank heist goes south, the fate of a hidden map to a lost gold mine rests with a do-gooder insurance salesman.
as a starting point anyway… I’m caffeine deprived
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