I agree with Odie, you should connect the inciting incident with the goal. The gang that does the snuff films should be the gang that killed his family. (By that, I mean it should be in the logline)
I agree with Odie, you should connect the inciting incident with the goal.
The gang that does the snuff films should be the gang that killed his family. (By that, I mean it should be in the logline)
A researcher stumbles upon a group of young children, who can communicate without being connected, but he’s shocked to discover that the children wish to eradicate their elders–and particularly the researcher.
Richiev
The logline should not be about the lead being shocked, it should be about what he does about the situation.
The logline should not be about the lead being shocked, it should be about what he does about the situation.
See lessA boy whose family was brutally murdered joins a squad of bounty hunters squad to free a community of women and children victims of a gang dedicated to making snuff movies.
Richiev
I agree with Odie, you should connect the inciting incident with the goal. The gang that does the snuff films should be the gang that killed his family. (By that, I mean it should be in the logline)
I agree with Odie, you should connect the inciting incident with the goal.
The gang that does the snuff films should be the gang that killed his family. (By that, I mean it should be in the logline)
See lessWhen a woman with abandonment issues gets dumped, she drags her pregnant bestie on a roadtrip, attempting to find love again. Halfway there, she learns she too is pregnant. She considers keeping the baby, so as to never be alone again. Forced to deliver her friend’s baby in the car, she realizes her need is not a baby, but the love that has always been in their friendship.
Richiev
Great logline example Odie.
Great logline example Odie.
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