A logline should tell the reader who's the lead character, what they want, and what's standing in their way. Because I don't know what your lead character wants, it's difficult to tell what the story is about. I can see it has something to do with magic apples, but not sure what the magic apples doRead more
"When he's hired to track down a mysterious beast who has been terrorizing the people of the Kabyle mountains, a professional hunter soon finds the tables turned when he and his crew become the hunted."
You should always think about writing the logline from the perspective of the lead character: for instance.You write (Revision 1): A righteous entrepreneur dies mysteriously while battling autocratic leader...From the lead character's point of view: When his best friend is murdered while battling anRead more
A physicist’s family is miraculously spared when a firestorm passes over their horse ranch in October 2003, leaving behind basketfuls of supernatural evidence.
Richiev
A logline should tell the reader who's the lead character, what they want, and what's standing in their way. Because I don't know what your lead character wants, it's difficult to tell what the story is about. I can see it has something to do with magic apples, but not sure what the magic apples doRead more
Massacres and mysterious disappearings are occuring in the Kabyle mountain regions of Algeria by a dangerous beast. A professional hunter is engaged by authorities to track down the creature and eliminate it, he will soon realize the task won’t be as simple as his previous achievements.
Richiev
"When he's hired to track down a mysterious beast who has been terrorizing the people of the Kabyle mountains, a professional hunter soon finds the tables turned when he and his crew become the hunted."
A selfish drunkard is forced to run a startup and fight powerful government agencies after he inherits it from his righteous entrepreneur best friend who died mysteriously.
Richiev
You should always think about writing the logline from the perspective of the lead character: for instance.You write (Revision 1): A righteous entrepreneur dies mysteriously while battling autocratic leader...From the lead character's point of view: When his best friend is murdered while battling anRead more