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Reincarnated as a baby who kept his memory into the world of sword and magic, former shut-in mid age scientist sets on a mission to live a meaningful life, only to find out that his former boss who caused the accident and killed them both has been reincarnated aswell and is set on repeating the planet threatening experiment again. (Epic fantasy book novel)
Trying to shorten it futher. “After his boss kills them both, a former shut-in scientist reincarnated with his memories in a sword and magic world, must stop his menace finding a way to repeat the deadly experiment that could destroy the world.” Problem is that you still use the word "world "twice,Read more
Trying to shorten it futher. “After his boss kills them both, a former shut-in scientist reincarnated with his memories in a sword and magic world, must stop his menace finding a way to repeat the deadly experiment that could destroy the world.”
Problem is that you still use the word “world “twice, and I can’t change the second “world” into Earth, because I don’t kow if wer’re talking Earth.Sure, I could end with the word “planet”, but destroying a world=society/societies is different from destroying the whole planet.
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I absolutelyy love this logline/story. If you can make the logline even better, great!!
I absolutelyy love this logline/story. If you can make the logline even better, great!!
See lessA dog makes his way back home to his owner after they’re separated in a bombing during the Korean War.
Make it against all ods. Maybe. "After being separated in a bombing during the Korean War, an injured Chihuahua -- through inhospitable mountains -- makes his way back home to his owner." But not sure the sentence construction works.
Make it against all ods.
Maybe. “After being separated in a bombing during the Korean War, an injured Chihuahua — through inhospitable mountains — makes his way back home to his owner.”
But not sure the sentence construction works.
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