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Very nice.? I like that it's relevant to today's headlines. What are the stakes?? Will he get sued and lose his record label?? Will he lose his true love?? Which one would he choose if he had to?? ?Why should I be worried about this character?? Is he guilty of this crime?? How does he vindicate himsRead more
It sounds interesting but there are no real stakes for your character. There's no immediate threat so we're not on the edge of our seat. If he is fighting the terrorists while building a future with the woman he loves...now we have some conflict brewing.
Thanks for the advice everyone! Here??are mandatory and optional pieces of the formula: My major event is the old man being uploaded to an "alternate reality" game called "The Cloud". ??There are no headsets and the game play is indistinguishable from the real world, similar to the Matrix. ? My heroRead more