Interesting concept. Maybe he was also asked by his friend to participate, but refused because he was too scared. Either way, I like the story. You have something good here!
Agree with Mike. Working on a serum inside the lab all day is not going to be really interesting for an audience. You have to expand your story beyond that.
In the aftermath of a school shooting, the perpetrator’s loner best friend becomes a romantically involved with a popular girl who was injured in the incident. Their relationship is put to the test when he is forced to testify at an inquest that he had foreknowledge of the tragedy.
savinh0
Sounds interesting! I like your story idea.
In the aftermath of a school shooting, the perpetrator’s loner best friend becomes a romantically involved with a popular girl who was injured in the incident. Their relationship is put to the test when he is forced to testify at an inquest that he had foreknowledge of the tragedy.
savinh0
Interesting concept. Maybe he was also asked by his friend to participate, but refused because he was too scared. Either way, I like the story. You have something good here!
When a lab accident makes him lose his sense of touch, a morally ambiguous top scientist must create a serum before he loses his other senses.
savinh0
Agree with Mike. Working on a serum inside the lab all day is not going to be really interesting for an audience. You have to expand your story beyond that.