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  1. Posted: July 6, 2020In: Student Loglines

    When a lab accident makes him lose his sense of touch, a morally ambiguous top scientist must create a serum before he loses his other senses.

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    Added an answer on July 7, 2020 at 10:49 pm

    Agree with Mike. Working on a serum inside the lab all day is not going to be really interesting for an audience. You have to expand your story beyond that.

    Agree with Mike.
    Working on a serum inside the lab all day is not going to be really interesting for an audience.
    You have to expand your story beyond that.

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  2. Posted: July 7, 2020In: Noir

    When a series of unusual deaths occur in an uncharted region of Alaska, an aspiring detective must retain his lawful morality in a hidden barbaric world to seek those responsible.

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    Added an answer on July 7, 2020 at 10:46 pm

    You don't have to add a detailed description of the story below your logline. If we don't understand your premise based on your logline, your logline is not ready. Your logline has to stand on its own. Now to your logline: I like it! Can visualize the story based on your wording. However, I would trRead more

    You don’t have to add a detailed description of the story below your logline. If we don’t understand your premise based on your logline, your logline is not ready.
    Your logline has to stand on its own.
    Now to your logline:
    I like it! Can visualize the story based on your wording. However, I would try to find something better than “unusual”. Sounds too generic for me, because unusual can mean aliens, ghosts or just crazy murderers.

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  3. Posted: June 29, 2020In: Comedy

    After an actual demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, a spineless director must fight his demonic spouse to save the cast and crew.

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    Added an answer on July 4, 2020 at 1:30 am

    I like both loglines (Neer and dpg). Two totally different story directions though.

    I like both loglines (Neer and dpg). Two totally different story directions though.

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