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When a series of unusual deaths occur in an uncharted region of Alaska, an aspiring detective must retain his lawful morality in a hidden barbaric world to seek those responsible.
You don't have to add a detailed description of the story below your logline. If we don't understand your premise based on your logline, your logline is not ready. Your logline has to stand on its own. Now to your logline: I like it! Can visualize the story based on your wording. However, I would trRead more
You don’t have to add a detailed description of the story below your logline. If we don’t understand your premise based on your logline, your logline is not ready.
See lessYour logline has to stand on its own.
Now to your logline:
I like it! Can visualize the story based on your wording. However, I would try to find something better than “unusual”. Sounds too generic for me, because unusual can mean aliens, ghosts or just crazy murderers.
After an actual demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, a spineless director must fight his demonic spouse to save the cast and crew.
I like both loglines (Neer and dpg). Two totally different story directions though.
I like both loglines (Neer and dpg). Two totally different story directions though.
See lessOne lonely Filipino seafarer in a cruise ship finds comfort to his roommate who saves money for his wedding but he unexpectedly falls for him, and as they sail together his feelings grow deeper until he’s force to reveal it.
I can see a concept, but I can't see a logline with the needed elements. Discovering your own identity can be part of your characters dramatic need. But you want him to have some kind of visual goal as well in order to visualize the story. Preparing for a wedding is one point you make. What does thaRead more
I can see a concept, but I can’t see a logline with the needed elements.
See lessDiscovering your own identity can be part of your characters dramatic need. But you want him to have some kind of visual goal as well in order to visualize the story.
Preparing for a wedding is one point you make. What does that mean? Too vague.
The other point is attempting suicide. How does this reflect the direction of your story?