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  1. Posted: May 2, 2020In: Romance

    When a bad boy movie star agrees to a blind date, he ends up with his biggest fan – a struggling single mom, whom he falls for.

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2020 at 4:50 am

    I love this concept! The logline is okay, but I feel like there is something missing. I would add a twist as a midpoint reversal to change the direction of the story. I think there is too little conflict in the logline right now or maybe it is not visible. What are they going to do as a couple afterRead more

    I love this concept! The logline is okay, but I feel like there is something missing.

    I would add a twist as a midpoint reversal to change the direction of the story. I think there is too little conflict in the logline right now or maybe it is not visible. What are they going to do as a couple after they fall in love? What is standing in their way?

     

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  2. Posted: April 24, 2020In: Examples

    After losing the love of his life in the streets of India, a homeless teenager participates in the TV show? Who wants to be a millionaire to find her again. Film: Slumdog Millionaire (2008) (30 words)

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    Added an answer on April 24, 2020 at 5:00 pm

    Maybe this is a more accurate version:After losing the love of his life, a homeless teenager participates in the TV show? Who wants to be a millionaire to find her again by remembering his own life in the slums of India.(35 words)Slumdog Millionaire (2008)

    Maybe this is a more accurate version:

    After losing the love of his life, a homeless teenager participates in the TV show? Who wants to be a millionaire to find her again by remembering his own life in the slums of India.

    (35 words)

    Slumdog Millionaire (2008)

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  3. Posted: November 12, 2017In: Drama

    After leaving his tiny home village, A lonely man returns many years later to win back his childhood sweetheart only to find out she never existed.

    savinh0 Samurai
    Added an answer on November 12, 2017 at 6:01 am

    I understand your last sentence "only to find out she never existed" as the beginning of your story, aka plot point I. But as dpg already stated, what is the objective goal of your protagonist after he finds out she never existed. What does he have to do? Right now,? with this version, there is no rRead more

    I understand your last sentence “only to find out she never existed” as the beginning of your story, aka plot point I.
    But as dpg already stated, what is the objective goal of your protagonist after he finds out she never existed. What does he have to do?
    Right now,? with this version, there is no road map and clear intention in what kind of direction your second act is going for.
    Does he want to prove that she exists (existed)?
    Often, the best solution to this problem is by defining the theme of your story.
    Example 1: My story is about delucions that can be so strong that you literally think they are real.
    Example 2: My story is about second chances and how everybody should be able to make up for his first failures.

    So, what is your story (logline) really, deeply about?
    If you know that question (or answer), you have your logline- and, thus, your story.

    Hope that helped.

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