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When a desperate fugitive randomly chooses the house of a reclusive lock-in to hide out in, he must pander to her love-starved attention or risk being discovered by the police. – A dark romantic comedy.
I LOVE this premise! Would like some kind of ticking-clock or increasing stakes beyond simply being discovered by police. Does she make him go out to buy her lingerie?? ?Is he engaged to another woman?? Is he gay? Although it's a different genre, it might be worth watching Misery!
I LOVE this premise! Would like some kind of ticking-clock or increasing stakes beyond simply being discovered by police. Does she make him go out to buy her lingerie?? ?Is he engaged to another woman?? Is he gay? Although it’s a different genre, it might be worth watching Misery!
See lessWhen a dangerous CME is earthbound, and a satellite reflector won’t work, NASA, learning they have four days till impact, release a female hacker from prison, to find the problem and save the planet.
This has great potential! I'd like to vest immediately in your protagonist and why this is uniquely her story.? By way of an over the top, wacky example: Wrongfully convicted of hacking NASA, a pregnant scientist is released from prison to stop an extinction level event from destroying Earth in fourRead more
This has great potential! I’d like to vest immediately in your protagonist and why this is uniquely her story.? By way of an over the top, wacky example: Wrongfully convicted of hacking NASA, a pregnant scientist is released from prison to stop an extinction level event from destroying Earth in four days time. Keep working on it!
See lessA troupe of aspiring college actors board a train bound for California hoping to make it big but must fight to stay alive as they are stalked by a mysterious passenger, who is eager to steal their spotlight and will stop at nothing to get it.
Love the premise of a contained setting. Agree with Overlord's comments. I humbly suggest you try getting more of what makes your story unique into the logline.? Just as an example: "after a college actress boards a Hollywood-bound train for a big-picture open call, a mysterious stranger with a hiddRead more
Love the premise of a contained setting. Agree with Overlord’s comments. I humbly suggest you try getting more of what makes your story unique into the logline.? Just as an example: “after a college actress boards a Hollywood-bound train for a big-picture open call, a mysterious stranger with a hidden agenda and an eerie ability to evade train authorities terrorizes? and stalks her to the point she questions her sanity.”? Over the top, but hopefully you get where I’m going with this.? Best of luck.
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