Well....it kills some users and not others. If you forward it to a friend you are spared. Would you say that qualifies as "an app that kills people who use it" for the purposes of the logline? It sounds better but is incorrect. The app does not kill everyone who uses it.
Well….it kills some users and not others. If you forward it to a friend you are spared. Would you say that qualifies as “an app that kills people who use it” for the purposes of the logline? It sounds better but is incorrect. The app does not kill everyone who uses it.
A trio of college students discovers street racing becoming deadly when they discover a racer was a serial killer.
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I feel like the name of the story is key.
I feel like the name of the story is key.
See lessLogline: A hardened cyber crimes analyst must shut down the source of a cursed smartphone app that seems to kill people who use it before the app strikes its next targets, her estranged family.
SSalvatore
Well....it kills some users and not others. If you forward it to a friend you are spared. Would you say that qualifies as "an app that kills people who use it" for the purposes of the logline? It sounds better but is incorrect. The app does not kill everyone who uses it.
Well….it kills some users and not others. If you forward it to a friend you are spared. Would you say that qualifies as “an app that kills people who use it” for the purposes of the logline? It sounds better but is incorrect.
See lessThe app does not kill everyone who uses it.
Logline: A hardened cyber crimes analyst must shut down the source of a cursed smartphone app that seems to kill people who use it before the app strikes its next targets, her estranged family.
SSalvatore
Hi Ninann, thanks for the feedback!
Hi Ninann, thanks for the feedback!
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