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  1. Posted: August 23, 2020In: Comedy

    Two incompetent, drunken corporate video producers toil aimlessly at the bottom of a barrel no-one wants to scrape and, as they owe money to a sadistic, Ealing comedy-loving, international crime boss, they have to take increasingly frantic measures to save their lives and reproductive organs.

    Stan Arnold Penpusher
    Replied to answer on August 25, 2020 at 2:33 am

    Hi Thanks for your review. Success is defined as survival. They are not bright enough to think any further than that. The two lead characters are both incompetent drunks, but have different approaches to life. They are lifelong friends and enemies. But I found that difficult to get into the loglineRead more

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    Thanks for your review. Success is defined as survival. They are not bright enough to think any further than that.

    The two lead characters are both incompetent drunks, but have different approaches to life. They are lifelong friends and enemies. But I found that difficult to get into the logline (which is long enough as it is!)
    Try They Win. You Lose. on amazon. The first of the series is free. That said, it might be difficult for American readers, For example. Ealing comedies were 1950s films made in England, and are now (understandably) unfashionable. I’ll try and get the conflict theme into my next attempt.
    Thanks

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