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When he finds out who killed his father, a laid-back youngster must return to save everyone from his evil Uncle and become the rightful king
Good! I Guess this is The Lion King. Maybe you should?write that the main character ?is a ?prince or that he need to save his family and loved ones from his evil uncle. /Julia
Good! I Guess this is The Lion King. Maybe you should?write that the main character ?is a ?prince or that he need to save his family and loved ones from his evil uncle.
/Julia
See lessWhen two personalities, a meek family man and a violent assassin, become aware they’re sharing the same mind and body, they work together to find the organisation that created them, but they’re both secretly planning to have the other erased to survive.
Sounds cool! What's the goal though? From this logline, I have no idea what the main character wants. Is it to get back to his family? Then write that in the logline. And what must he do to get back? Fight of this alternate personality of his (fight himself basically). I feel like the logline only dRead more
Sounds cool!
What’s the goal though? From this logline, I have no idea what the main character wants. Is it to get back to his family? Then write that in the logline. And what must he do to get back? Fight of this alternate personality of his (fight himself basically).
I feel like the logline only discribes the first act of the film, that the inciting incident is when he finds out his kidnapper isn’t real. What happens next?
Hope this helped! 🙂
See lessWhen a man is cut into two symmetrical halves completed with mechanical prosthesis, the two sides fight each other to become a full person again.
This sounds really interesting, he fights himself! I like it :) To make it more interesting, I would make one of the halfes the main character and the other one more of a antagonist. So maybe something like: "When a man is cut into two symmetrical halves completed with mechanical prosthesis and oneRead more
This sounds really interesting, he fights himself! I like it 🙂
To make it more interesting, I would make one of the halfes the main character and the other one more of a antagonist. So maybe something like:
“When a man is cut into two symmetrical halves completed with mechanical prosthesis and one of the halves becomes rabid, the other half must fight him and make them into one person agian.”
Or make the person(s) who cut the man in two the antagonist and the halves must work together? to become one person again. That would be more of a “get to know my own good and bad sides” – movie, where the main character has some revelation of? that he maybe is quite a mean person and changes this.
Personally, I like the first one better, where he must fight against himself 🙂
Hope this helped!
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