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I think your log line would sound better as follows - When an expert hunter discovers a ferocious beast, he risks his reputation if he doesn’t pursue and capture it to save a village at the expense of endangering his team mates. What do you think?
“he’s” Not the protagonist. Best in a logline to state the protagonist upfront. Best to start...”When (protagonist). Say what happens/occurs...then what they must do or not do and why...and what will be the result if or if the goal isn’t met.
Why does it matter that the protagonist is a farmer ? What you’ve described is “a peace loving ethical” person who must behave in an adverse way to his usual values and strength of character or stand witnessing the destruction of his town and possible murder of his girlfriend. If you weave these aspRead more