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To get a new set of legs, a paraplegic marine agrees to pilot an avatar (expensive living bio-puppet made of his dead brother’s and an indigenous tribes DNA). While helping relocate the natives for strip-mining, he’s spiritually transformed, falls for the chief’s daughter, and acts against the greedy organisation to prevent the settlement and planet from exploitation (57).
I'm posting this here just for my own reference, as it is a surprisingly detailed, yet concise paragraph synopsis: When his brother is killed in a robbery, paraplegic Marine Jake Sully decides to take his place in a mission on the distant world of Pandora. There he learns of greedy corporate figurehRead more
I’m posting this here just for my own reference, as it is a surprisingly detailed, yet concise paragraph synopsis:
When his brother is killed in a robbery, paraplegic Marine Jake Sully decides to take his place in a mission on the distant world of Pandora. There he learns of greedy corporate figurehead Parker Selfridge’s intentions of driving off the native humanoid “Na’vi” in order to mine for the precious material scattered throughout their rich woodland. In exchange for the spinal surgery that will fix his legs, Jake gathers intel for the cooperating military unit spearheaded by gung-ho Colonel Quaritch, while simultaneously attempting to infiltrate the Na’vi people with the use of an “avatar” identity. While Jake begins to bond with the native tribe and quickly falls in love with the beautiful alien Neytiri, the restless Colonel moves forward with his ruthless extermination tactics, forcing the soldier to take a stand – and fight back in an epic battle for the fate of Pandora.
See lessWhen a delusional young woman is confronted by the closure of her uncle’s vintage car dealership, she must travel cross-country to see it one last time.
It is unclear how the woman's delusion is connected to the story, or whether she can somehow overcome it. Also, we could do with some higher stakes. Why should she see the dealership again?
It is unclear how the woman’s delusion is connected to the story, or whether she can somehow overcome it.
See lessAlso, we could do with some higher stakes. Why should she see the dealership again?
Dangerous and heart-wrenching things an elderly Charlie does because of his own Alzheimer’s and bad childhood memories.
Thank you for your extensive review! On this site, I encourage people to reveal as much as possible, as we're developing our stories and the people reading are not (yet) the audience. Until the film is complete, in our industry we want to share as much information with the time-poor decision makers.Read more
Thank you for your extensive review!
See lessOn this site, I encourage people to reveal as much as possible, as we’re developing our stories and the people reading are not (yet) the audience.
Until the film is complete, in our industry we want to share as much information with the time-poor decision makers. So if a logline gives away the ending, I see it as a bonus.
Different rules apply for the marketing logline, where mystery and intrigue certainly have a place.